Sunday 3 January 2010

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Chickenshed Theatre Company would like to cordially invite you to their Christmas production of Carlo Codolli’s Pinocchio.Chickenshed are bringing this production back to life for a second time in what promises to be even better than the first. Experience the magic as the two hundred strong cast inclusively incorporate dance, drama, music and sign language to re tell an age old classic!
Follow Pinocchio along his journey as he transforms from a wooden puppet into a real life boy, from naughty to nice, and even into a donkey! Watch as the 7ft tall, hip HOPPING cricket bounces his way across the stage and marvel as the Blue Fairy enchants you with her aerobatics on the suspended circus ring.
This production is the perfect outing to get you into the Christmas spirit as the Chickenshed cast turns this fantastic classic into a truly unique and original experience for all the family. Never has a production made the audience feel so involved in a story as this one does, with characters popping up in the auditorium and magical songs encouraging them to sing and clap along.
Brought to you from their theatre in the heart of London’s Southgate, this production runs from the 9th December until 16th January.


Ticket prices:
Previews (Wed 9 – Sat 12 December):
Stalls: £12, Gallery: £10


Peak performances (Fri 18 December – Saturday 2 January):
Stalls: £19.50, Gallery: £13.50

Standard performances (all other dates):
Stalls: £18, Gallery: £12

Concessions are available for all performances.

Sign Language is integrated into all performances

Captioned performances:
Friday 18 December at 7.30pm
Friday 8 January at 12pm
Saturday 9 January at 3.30pm

Audio-described performances:
Wednesday 23 December at 7.30pm
Wednesday 6 January at 1pm & 7.30pm
Friday 8 January at 7.30pm

www.chickenshed.org.uk

Box Office: 0208 292 9222

2 comments:

  1. Hey Rosea

    This such a big change to the last version of this piece i feel that there is more info in this version which helps you sale the show more and i do feel that the little bit of story line in there helps the read want to come and see this production. the show info helps a lot as you know more about the company and all where the show is and when it's on and how you can get tickets for it.
    Well Done
    Murat

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  2. Hi Rosea,

    After reading the previous comments it is apparent that you have taken much advice that has been given and put it in to your new marketing piece. I agree with Ellie that you needed to space your writing a little so that people can see the structure of your piece and sub-conciously the reader sustains interest if the writing is set in smaller paragraphs.

    However on the whole I feel this piece of writing serves its purpose and especially liked the added detail of the performance:

    "Watch as the 7ft tall, hip HOPPING cricket bounces his way across the stage and marvel as the Blue Fairy enchants you with her aerobatics on the suspended circus ring."

    For me this added individuality and sparked some excitment from the production. You also motivate me to see Pinocchio by your use of words implying originality and creating a picture of a unique performance. This is difficult to do with a marketing piece as it can be misread as a descriptive piece.
    Your use of reference to the classic Pinocchio also benefits your piece:

    "Chickenshed are bringing this production back to life for a second time in what promises to be even better than the first."

    It leaves use eager to watch and compare the modern performance to the classic.

    Reading your piece has helped me to understand what is lacking from my own marketing piece so this illustates that you have marketed this with success.

    Well done

    Rachel
    x

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